Poem Giving Hope to All 2023-01-21
Being told that you'd help bring a new life.
The Savior, Emmanuel, Who can you tell?
your cousin, even if your not a wife.
Blessed be me for this, who could fortell?
A visit from my cousin, I shall agree
A blessing she is, never to be undone.
So young and humble to be called as she.
Only to magnify the Lord, Mother like son.
Both be blessed through all generation
Hope, mercy and strength to the great nation.
Poetic form ababcdcdee 10 line 7-10 syllable (try to stick 8 or 10)
similar to the poem The Ivy Green by Charles dickens https://poemanalysis.com/charles-dickens/the-ivy-green/
Focus on poem that comes from the perspective of someone who listened to someone speaking about what they heard or has listened to someone reading what is written.
Previous Poem Redone 2019-01-30 Horn of Salvation
Allow me my friend to illuminate your mind
for many eye did see, foot followed and aligned
hearts praying for prophecies divining
Dayspring appearing to enlighten by shining
Blessed is she glorified through all generation
Giving hope, mercy and strength to the great Nation.
original poem created 2019/01/06
Allow me my friend, Theophilus, to illuminate your mind
for many eye did see, foot did follow and others became aligned
hearts praying for prophecies divining
Dayspring appearing to enlighten by shining (those in darkness)
Blessed is she glorifying Adonai through all generation
Giving hope, showing mercy and strengthing the great Nation
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